I hate for folks to think that I'm begging or needy, but the only way you can improve your art is when people leave substantive comments. So, if you read my poem today (or other poems on other days), please answer these 3 questions:
1. What image or images did you particularly enjoy, and why?
2. What image or images, idea or ideas did you not understand? (I will try to explain them as a follow-up)
3. What is one way that I can improve my presentation to make my poetry easier to understand?
Many thanks in advance.